高考英语书面表达日记体写作点津

写作指津：

【思路点拨】日记是用来记录一天中所发生的有意义的、值得记录的事件。在日记中,人们会对事件发表议论，阐述一下自己的态度或体会。日记中所记录的事情可以自己的直接经历也可以说描述他人的事情。日记的种类有很多种，从体裁角度，可以分为记事型日记和议论型日记。记事型是以某种顺序描述某一件事情发生发展的过程。而议论型日记是针对当天的某一事件或某一现象表明自己的看法或态度。日记的篇章结构可以从以下几个角度入手：首先要对所发生的事件或现象进行描述。按照事件发展的先后顺序进行，适当添加对天气或景物或心情的描述。其次要发表感想或议论，针对事件进行感悟或议论性的描述，以使文章有所立意。最后要对未来提出展望或推测，或表示决心、态度、观点、意图、希冀等。

日记体的时态：日记中所记述的事情通常发生在过去，常用一般过去时；

典例第一篇

根据下列提示，写一则日记。提示如下：

1.日期：3月26日星期六

2.天气：多云

3.下午上课时，你老是开小差，因为总是想着晚上7点要去看电影《希望之路》。在放学回家的路上，你遇到了一个迷路的孩子，把他送回了家。你虽然没有能够看上电影，但是心里却很高兴。

Saturday March 26 Cloudy

It’s a Saturday again. How time flies! Another week has passed.

This afternoon, I was often absent-minded in class because I was eager to see the new film “The Road To Hope”, which would be shown at 7:00 p.m. on the school playground. As soon as class was over, I hurried out of the classroom.

On the way home, I saw a little child standing by the roadside crying. Obviously, he had lost his way. Forgetting all about the film, I went up to him and asked him to tell me whatever he knew about his family. It took me nearly an hour to send him home. His parents were very glad to find their lost child back and thanked me again and again.

I missed the film. However, I felt very happy.

典例第二篇

2月4日，星期天上午，你们班同学骑车到学校附近的公园组织了一次环保活动。请根据下表内容，写一篇日记，发表你对此次活动的看法。

1组

扫除：清理废纸、烟蒂、塑料袋等废弃物

2组

宣传：树立标牌，告诉游客要爱护花木

3组

演讲：向游客宣传“白色污染”的害处以及保护环境的重要性

你的看法

……

注意：

1．日记必须包括表内所有的内容，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯；

2．日记格式及首句已给出，不列入总词数；

3．词数：100词左右。

4．参考词汇：烟蒂cigarette end

February 4, Sunday Fine

This morning our class organized an environmental protection activity in the nearby park. On arriving there, we were divided into three groups .The first group collected the rubbish, such as the waste paper, cigarette ends ,plastic bags and so on. The second group set up several boards to remind the visitors to take care of the flowers and trees. The last group gave a speech to the visitors on the danger of “white pollution” and the importance of protecting the environment.

I think it is very important for us to protect the environment .For the sake of people's health and happiness, measures should be taken to control and prevent pollution and everyone should make a contribution to it.

典例第三篇

五月十日(星期日)，天气晴朗。这天上午，你去新华书店买书。你买了一些英语读物和参考书。正要离开时，突然发现以个年轻的小伙子站在书柜前面，手里拿着几本书，显得有点不知所措的样子，你走上前去，问他怎么回事，他告诉你他是来买书的，但忘记带钱了。经过打听，知道这位青年原来是你班同学张华的哥哥，你主动借给他钱。他高高兴兴地买了书。下午，张华把你借给他哥哥的钱还给你，并致谢意。

参考答案：

May 10, Sunday Fine

This morning I went to the Xinhua Bookstore to buy some books. There were a lot of people there, and most of them were middle school students. I chose some English reading materials and a few copies of reference books. I was about to leave when I suddenly saw a young man standing in front of the bookshelves, with a few books in his hand and looking worried. I went over and asked him what was the matter. He told me that he had come to buy books, but had forgotten to bring money. And then I knew he was the elder brother of Zhang Hua, a classmate of mine. I offered to lend him some money. Having got the books he wanted, he felt very thankful to me. In the afternoon Zhang Hua returned me the money with many thanks.

I feel very pleased today because I have done some thing useful for others.

典例第四篇高考英语微信公众号Englishtec, 高考英语资料分享QQ群号483098206.

假设你是小明，你的朋友杰克很喜欢旅游，发电子邮件给你询问你的国庆旅程。你给他的回信内容包括：

时间：2012年10月1日

人员：家人和朋友们

地点：新加坡国家植物园(Singapore National botanical garden)，亚洲最著名的植物园之一。

内容：1. 花了三个多小时游遍了植物园，那里有各色各样的我从未见过的植物，例如新加

坡的国花(national flower)—卓锦万黛兰(Vanda Miss Joaquim)；

2. 参观当地礼品店，购买了许多纪念品。

感想：1. 每个人都过得非常开心，旅程使我们印象深刻。

2. 旅游可以增加我们对不同地方、不同国家的地理、风俗习惯、文化和生活等方面的了解

3. 旅游可以使我们开阔视野，学到许多书本以外的知识。

Dear Jack,

I’m glad to have received your e-mail. Now I’ll tell you something about my journey during the National Da On October 1st, 2012, We went on a trip to Singapore National botanical garden, one of the most famous botanical gardens in Asia, with my family and friends. It took us more than three hours to tour the garden, which had a variety of plants that I had never seen before, such as Vanda Miss Joaquim, the national flower of Singapore. Besides, we paid a visit to the local gift shop as well, where we purchased a great number of souvenirs. Everyone had great fun during the journey and it deeply impressed us. As far as I am concerned, not only can traveling widen our knowledge of geography, customs, cultures and lifestyles of different places and countries, but it can also broaden our horizons, enabling us to learn a lot far beyond our books.

Yours,

Xiao Ming

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